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miss my roommates I had hardly meet my roommates since i graduated from university.They have had their work and life.May be one or two years later,they will get married with their lover.I hope they have a happy life. I offen remembered of our life in university.We offen talked in whisper in the class. Surely we can also study each other,speciall school would have the examination.It spent many evening on study for coming a examinasion.we offen regreted that we haven't learned study hard at the beginning.But we never corrected. We offen do many crazy things together.On the school sports meeting,we cried to strick to run.We believed we can but it's useless to insist.Outside dormitory,you could hear singing and laughter from our dormitory.My classmates eat too much.You would be wondered if you saw how much they eat.All we like travel.we have a common dream that we can travel together.But now it's different to come true.We work in different city and it is a little far. When i was watching the star in sky in evening,i would miss them.How are they?What are they doing?Do they also miss me?

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I had hardly meet (see) my roommates since i graduated from university.They have had (are busy with) their work and life (lives).May be  (Maybe)
one or two years later,they will get married with their lover.I hope they have a happy life. (happy lives)

I offen remembered of our (often remember about our) life in university (university days).We offen talked in whisper(s) in the class. Surely we can also study each other,speciall school would have the examination. (We would also study together especially when we had an exam coming up) It spent many evening on study for coming a examinasion. (Many evenings were spent on study) we offen regreted that we haven't learned study hard at the beginning. (Often we regretted that we hadn't studied since the beginning of the semester) But we never corrected.  (But we never changed our bad habits)

We offen do (often did) many crazy things together.On (at)the school sports meeting,we cried to strick to run.We believed we can but it's useless to insist. [I don't understand this] Outside (the) dormitory,you could hear singing and laughter (coming) from our dormitory.My classmates eat too much.You would be wondered (amazed)if you saw how much they eat.All we (of us) like (to) travel.we have a common dream that we can travel together.But now it's different to come true. (But now it's going to be hard to realize this dream) We work in different city (cities) and it is a little far. (that are far from each other)

When i was watching (watch) the (evening) star(s) in (the) sky in evening,i would miss them.How are they?What are they doing?Do they also miss me?

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