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My Dream Everyone has a dream. When I was a child ,my dream was to be a singer. I always sang by the VCD with my family after dinner. Cause I was very shy I just sang a few of song. But I am quite happy when I was complimented . Then my favouriate thing become listening to music.Although I love music, I just put my dream into my heart. When I went to college, I was ever attend a guitar club to learn how to play it, it's really a very happy time,I think it is a very important step to make my dream come true.

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My Dream

Everyone has a dream. When I was a child, my dream was to be a singer. I always sang with the VCD with my family after dinner. Because I was very shy I just sang a few of songs, but I was quite happy when I was complimented. Then, my favorite thing became listening to music. Although I love music, I just put my dream into my heart. When I went to college, I was always attending a guitar club to learn how to play it. It was really a very happy time. I think it is a very important step to make my dream come true.

 

[Good job.  A little problem with tenses.  Also, remember to put a space after all periods and commas, not before.]

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My Dream

Everyone has a dream. When I was As a child, my dream was to be a singer; I always sang along to by the VCD with my family after dinner. Cause I was very shy I just sang a few of songs, but I was always am quite happy when I was complimented. Then my favourite thing became listening to music. Although I love music, I just put my dream into my heart. When I went to college, I was ever always attending a guitar club to learn how to play it, that was really a very happy time, and I think it was a very important step to make my dream come true.

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Hi! I'm Ron in New York, USA. I'm happy to help you improve your spoken English and I'd love to be new friends, too! I use Skype: ron.jenkins86 and QQ: 1990992857 . Let's chat soon! :)
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thank you very much！
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Wow.. May all your dreams come true. Go for it and have fun.

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