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The art of collecting coins.
I've been collecting coins for a while, and everytime it's becoming more and more interesting and fascinating for me. This hobby/activity is called "numismatics".
One of the most fascinating things about this, is that every coin has its own story, and trough it, you can learn the history of a country in a "funny" way. So, in this case, we can say that a coin can be considered as a piece of history.
By now, I'm just collecting coins from my country (Chile) and the United States, otherwise, I would have to buy every single coin that I see, and that's not (a good) the idea. By the way, tomorrow I'll go to a "street market" and i hope to find a treasure, although I know that I will find one, because history has no price.
That's it. This entry was short, I hope it doesn't bore you.
Regards !!
Good luck with tomorrow's treasure hunt! :D
The art of collecting coins.
I've been collecting coins for a while, and every time (two words) it's becoming more and more interesting and fascinating for me. This hobby/activity is called "numismatics".
One of the most fascinating things about this, is that every coin has its own story, and through it you can learn the history of a country in a "funny" way. So, in this case, we can say that a coin can be considered as a piece of history.
So far By now, I'm just collecting coins from my country (Chile) and the United States, otherwise, I would have to buy every single coin that I see, and that's not the idea. By the way, tomorrow I'll go to a "street market" and i hope to find a treasure, although I know that I will (how do you know?) find one, because history has no price (I don't follow your logic here).
That's it. This entry was short to avoid don't boring you.
Regards !!
The art of collecting coins.
I've been collecting coins for a while, and (every time) it's becoming more and more interesting and fascinating for me. This hobby/activity is called "numismatics." (periods always inside quote marks)
One of the most fascinating things about this (no comma) is that every coin has its own story. Through it, you can learn the history of a country in a "funny" way. So, in this case, we can say that a coin can be considered as a piece of history.
Now, I'm just collecting coins from my country (Chile) and the United States; otherwise I would have to buy every single coin that I see, and that's not the idea. By the way, tomorrow I'll go to a "street market" and I hope to find a treasure. I know that I will find one, because history has no price.
That's it. This entry was short so that it wouldn't bore you.
Regards !!
(Watch those run-on sentences and commas. Whenever you finish a thought, it's always best to end the sentence with a period and start another one. Other than that, great job!)
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