judging a person through the external appearance
Introduction Statement:
In the modern life, the world has many advances, and people have changed about style, external appearance and standard. There are some arguments around this issue; someone argue that a person can be judge through their style, but the others believe that it is wrong. In my view, I think not only style but also some reasons such as knowledge, gesture, action and social communication skills to judge a person.
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Judging a person through by their external appearance
Introduction Statement:
In the modern life, the world has had many advances, and people have changed about in terms of style, external appearances and standards. There are some arguments around this issue; someone argued that a person can be judged for their style, but theothers believe that this is wrong. In my view, I think a person is not only judged by their style but also by other reasons such as their knowledge, gestures, actions and social communication skills. to judge a person.
-That's probably how I would write it, hope it helps :)
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So bored, really nobody can correct my paragraph ^.^
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