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Timid Cat Hello there. In this entry, I will try some adjectives that I've come across recently. I think English has a number of expressive adjectives. My sister has a pet cat. He is so timid that he never lets others touch him. He hides under a couch as soon as someone comes to her house. I try to stroke him whenever I visit my sister's house, but it has never worked even once. Someday I will be friends with him and touch his fluffy coat as much as I want. I want a cat, too. Dogs would be better pets to touch and play with. However, cats are more independent, and I know that cats are that way. But I prefer cats to dogs. For some reason, I'm reluctant to keep a dog. Of course I also love dogs, though. I hope to get a friendly and clingy cat.

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Thank you, Mark! So glad to hear that. I'm still bad at arranging English sentences so that I can make it more comfortable to read. Thank you for your advice. I'll do my best.
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Your grammar was 100% perfect! Amazing work, well done! In terms of your written expression, the only criticism I would have is that you go back and forth between the advantages and disadvantages of cats and dogs in your second half, and this back-and-forth makes it a little confusing to read. I would probably rewrite the last half for simplicity and clarity. "Cats are X, Y and Z. Of course, dogs are A and B. But ultimately, I want a cat, because L and M." Ie. keep all your "pros" and "cons" together. This is very "komakai" though; your English is excellent.
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