Can you hear me ?

I dreamed dreamt last night that I was playing with my nephew. (Actually I don't have a nephew )
Then all of a sudden my cellphone rang. I picked up the phone. It was my friend calling .
She asked me about my recent life, just like an old friend .
We are old friends but she had never called me ever since we graduated .
She talked about her job and her husband (Actually she doesn't have a husband. I don't know what happened to this dream dreamt this; maybe I ate too much too many vegetables lately)
And I could hear her husband was yelling at her over there .
She did not finish what she was trying to said say as the phone was on hold. I kept saying "Can you hear me ,Can you hear me?" (你能听到吗)" but no answer .
And Then, my nephew said "Can you hear that (你能听到吗)，it 's raining outside"

Can you hear me ?

I dreamed last night .
I was playing with my nephew. (Actually i don't have a nephew )
Then my cellphone rang. I picked up the phone. It was my friend calling .
She asked me about my recent life, just like an old friend would.
We are old friends but she has never called me since we graduated .
She talked about her job and her husband (Actually she doesn't have a husband. I don't know what happened to this dream, maybe I have been eating too much vegetable lately)
and I could hear her husband was yelling at her over there.
She did not finish what she trying to say said, the phone was on hold. I kept saying "Can you hear me" "Can you hear me" (你能听到吗)" but no answer reply.
And my nephew said "Can you hear that (你能听到吗)，it 's raining outside "

Punctuation: SPACE AFTER punctuation (comma fullstop...)