It seems serious.

I have sign up for Business English Certificate Vantage（BEC vantage）, and today my partner and I decided to go to Sun Yat-sen University pay the fee for the exam. It's so hot today, and we have to go outside to another university to pay the fee. (As for me its a little expensive of the fee.) (I think the fee is a little expensive)

I have an thought idea for after this summer vocation vacation. (I'm not sure whay your trying to say here but I think this would sound better : "I had an idea! After summer vacation ended, I would learn English/take an English exam.")

well, It's a big deal and its seems I had gave have given myself a big challenge for myself. Additionally my grammar, and words vocabulary, and expressions are my weaknesses. Oral english is necessary and important..
So...woooow. Come on! of course I hope I can make a miracle (and pass it) in these day. The exam day is on November 30. Fight ~!

Good luck! Study hard and practice a lot! :3

It seems serious.

I have sign up for Business English Certificate Vantage（BEC vantage）, and today my partner and i decided to Sun Yat-sen University pay the fee for the exam. its so hot today,we have to go outside to another university to pay the fee.(As for me its a little expensive of the fee.)
I have a thought after this summer vocation.
well, Its a big deal and its seems i had gave big challenge for myself. additionally my grammar and words expressions are my weakness. oral english is necessary important..
So..woooow. come on,of course i hope i can make a miracle(pass it) in these day.The exam day is November 30. fight ~!

It seems serious.

I have signed up for the Business English Certificate Vantage (BEC Vantage), and today my partner and I decided to go to Sun Yat-sen University to pay the fee for the exam.  It's so hot today that we had to go to another university to pay the fee (which to me is a little expensive). 

I had this thought after summer vacation.  Well, it's a big deal and it seems like I have given myself a big challenge.  Grammar and expressions are my weaknesses.  Oral English is of course important.  So... wooooow.  Of course I'm hoping for a miracle on the day of the test (that I pass it).  The date of the exam is November 30th. Fight! (more natural: Game on!)

Good luck on your test!  If you'd like to practice your spoken English, send me a message with your Skype ID and I will add you.  我们都练习口语普通话和英语吧！