this is bad day
Today i go to the school office to apply for undergraduate degreer didn't pass the computer course,and my bag broken,.This system is changed,i can only be repaired
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This is a bad day
Today I go went to the school office to apply for an undergraduate degreer [perhaps you meant "undergraduate admission], but didn't pass the computer course and my bag broken.This system is changed,i can only be repaired [sorry, I'm not sure what you mean in that last sentence].
I hope you have better luck in your future! You seem very dedicated to your English and I'm sure you will progress very well :)
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Thanks for your blessing and correction,I need to improve my English now,Because i don;t understand to express in English
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Today i WENT to the school office to apply for undergraduate degree, I didnt get passed the computer course and my bag broke while i was in the course. This system has changed, i should prepared myself.
first im no expert but i hope my corrections will help you...and im so sorry for you i hope you have good luck next time,best wishes.
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