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Sushi is too expensive + Australian Government Elections 最近,ブリスベンの寿司が高価なです。 すべての寿司レストランの価格が高すぎです。本当に不合理ですね。 さらに悪いことに,寿司レストランは小さすぎ寿司を作ることになりました!(Pretty sure I worded this wrong :s) 私はすしが大好きですから、これは非常に残念です。 オーストラリアの食べ物が高すぎですね、本当に不具合です。比較において,台湾の食べ物がとても安くて、美味しいです。 とにかく,今私の家族はテレビにオーストラリアの政府選挙を見ます。 私は、自由党が勝つと思います。 Awww, my family is watching Kevin Rudd making his speech on television that he's giving up his seat as the Parliamentary leader of Labor from today on and will never take his seat back. It's a bit of a shame, because he's been so entertaining for the last month or so. It's said that Tony Abbot will become the new leader of Australia's government, seeing as the Liberal party is already winning by a landslide. Anyways, the votes will be counted by the end of tonight so we shall find out the results soon enough. (Please feel free to correct my mistakes!)

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Sushi is too expensive + Australian Government Elections

最近,ブリスベンの寿司が高価なです。
すべての寿司レストランの価格は高すぎます。本当に理不尽(りふじん)ですね。
さらに悪いことに,寿司レストランは小さすぎる寿司を作りはじめました(Mirai5 grammar(*^^*))!(Pretty sure I worded this wrong :s)
私はすしが大好きですから、これは非常に残念です。✓
オーストラリアの食べ物は高すぎますから、本当に不満(ふまん)です。比較において,台湾の食べ物がとても安くて、美味しいです。 ⇒台湾と日本の食べ物を比(くら)べると、台湾のほうが安くて美味しいです(Mirai5 grammar)。

とにかく,今私の家族はテレビでオーストラリアの政府の選挙を見ています。
私は、自由党が勝つと思います。

Awww, my family is watching Kevin Rudd making his speech on television that he's giving up his seat as the Parliamentary leader of Labor from today on and will never take his seat back. It's a bit of a shame, because he's been so entertaining for the last month or so. It's said that Tony Abbot will become the new leader of Australia's government, seeing as the Liberal party is already winning by a landslide. Anyways, the votes will be counted by the end of tonight so we shall find out the results soon enough.

(Please feel free to correct my mistakes!)

 

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I have changed a couple of sentences with using grammar structure from Mirai5 text book and I hope your school is using the textbook.

 

Also, I went to "Ku-on" for lunch today.  The restaurant was good, but I was sad that the happy bakery had gone(>_<)

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Sushi is too expensive + Australian Government Elections

最近,ブリスベンの寿司が高価なです。
すべての寿司レストランの価格が高すぎです。本当に不合理(割に合わない)ですね。
さらに悪いことに,寿司レストランは小さすぎる寿司を作ることにようになりました!(Pretty sure I worded this wrong :s)
私はすしが大好きですから、これは非常に残念です。
オーストラリアの食べ物がは高すぎですね、本当に不具合(不満)です。比較においてそれにくらべて,台湾の食べ物がはとても安くて、美味しいです。

とにかく,今私の家族はテレビにでオーストラリアの政府選挙を見ていまます。
私は、自由党が勝つと思います。

Awww, my family is watching Kevin Rudd making his speech on television that he's giving up his seat as the Parliamentary leader of Labor from today on and will never take his seat back. It's a bit of a shame, because he's been so entertaining for the last month or so. It's said that Tony Abbot will become the new leader of Australia's government, seeing as the Liberal party is already winning by a landslide. Anyways, the votes will be counted by the end of tonight so we shall find out the results soon enough.

(Please feel free to correct my mistakes!)

 

青文字の部分は、あまりこの文脈では使わない言葉だったので、私ならばこう書くかな、と思った単語を入れてみました。

参考になれば嬉しいです。

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