My father lost my ipad !
My dad called and told me that he had lost my ipad when i got off my work.I asked him what happened and where was it that you lost my ipad.He said that he picked up my mom from her friend's home.He thought that he would be back soon. So he only got the car key out and unlocked the car door when he left. He left my ipad in the car.When he came back ,my ipad(there may be something else he did not know) was stolen.Fortunately,his car was still there.They reported to the police and called me.The policeman booked it and told him that there was no monitering where ipad was stolen.Too careless, i blamed him.
I really a little bit regretted why i blamed him just now when i got home.He must be feeling awful now.So i called him again and comforted him that there was nothing important in my ipad.
As the saying goes :Out with the old and in with the new.
Please points out mistakes ,Thank you.
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My father lost my ipad !
My dad called and told me that he had lost my ipad when i got off my work.(I guess that "got off" is for tranportation, like: I got off my car...So I'm not sure but maybe you wanted to say..."when I went to my work") I asked him what happened and where was it that you lost my ipad.("I asked him for it and how did he lose it") He said that he picked up my mom from her friend's home.He thought that he would be back soon. So he only got the car key out and unlocked the car door when he left. ("So he only got out the car key and he left it unlocked when he left") .He left my ipad in the car.When he came back ,my ipad(there may be something else he did not know) was stolen.Fortunately,his car was still there.They(who are they?? Or maybe only "He" your father) reported (the theft) to the police and called me.The policeman booked it and told him that there was no monitering (monitoring) where (specific: the) ipad was stolen.Too careless, i blamed him.
I really a little bit regretted (I was truly sorry) why (cause) I blamed him just now I blamed him at that time) when I got home.He must be feeling awful now.So I called him again and comforted him that there was nothing important in my ipad.
As the saying goes :Out with the old and in with the new.
Please points out mistakes ,Thank you.
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My father lost my ipad !
My dad called and told me that he had lost my ipad when i got off my work.I asked him what happened and where did it happen that you lost my ipad.He said that he picked up my mom from her friend's home.He thought that he would be back soon. So he only got the car key out and unlocked the car door when he left. He left my ipad in the car.When he came back ,my ipad(there may be something else he did not know) was stolen.Fortunately,his car was still there.They reported to the police and called me.The policeman booked it and told him that there was no monitering where ipad was stolen.Too careless, i blamed him.
I really a little bit regretted why i blamed him just now when i got home.He must be feeling awful now.So i called him again and comforted him that there was nothing important in my ipad.
As the saying goes :Out with the old and in with the new.
Please points out mistakes ,Thank you.
I did my best and could find just a few. I hope you get a new, better iPad! :)
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I am sorry for your bad luck. However, it is good that you can start that there is no important information on that ipad. Your dad feels regret and maybe some shame, but you are family and the two of you will deal with the problem in a mutually acceptable way. Good luck with the future and hopefully you find a way to do things so that you do not duplicate this problem.
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I do not download app(find your iphone/ipad) on my iphone ,so i can not locate my ipad.In addition,there is no 3G broadband card in it. So it is impossible to find it.
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