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Nasty (why nasty?) Thoughts
Dear, Monkey, I understand why you put your furry hands on your both eyes. You're right and clever. (what evil are you seeing then?)
Sadness kills happiness and happiness kills sadness. You can never feel pure happiness but you can easily feel pure sadness. There's always something stands between you and complete happiness. I got won/found/attained (anything but 'get/got') a new job. Awesome! My heart is still in Manchester :) (Manchester? What on earth is there in Manchester to capture a heart?) I pity cats. Protection and a good meal, that is their idea of happiness. (this is full of contradictions - and unanswered questions)
I'll try to stop thinking now. I want to think later. Life is short and I'll have a plenty of time and long moments of creepy silence after my death. Well, happiness is a choice, in the end. Lose yourself and don't try to find it. Enjoy the feeling of being lost. Hmmm....... I think I'm flying again. Time to land on earth.
Have a nice day!
Red is wrong and Green is correct ^^
Dear, Monkey, I understand why you put your furry hands on your both both of your eyes. You're right and clever.
Sadness kills happiness and happiness kills sadness. You can never feel pure happiness but you can easily feel pure sadness. There's always something stands standing between you and complete happiness. I got a new job. Awesome! My heart is still in Manchester :) I pity cats. Protection and a good meal, that is their idea of happiness. Protection and a good meal is their idea of happiness. OR Their idea of happiness is protection and a good meal.
I'll try to stop thinking now. I want to think later. Life is short and I'll have a plenty of time and long moments of creepy silence after my death. Well, happiness is a choice, in the end. Lose yourself and don't try to find it. Enjoy the feeling of being lost. Hmmm....... I think I'm flying again. Time to land on earth.
Have a nice day!
(Your entry is so interesting! Good job.)
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