My family

I have a happy family.There are three people in my family, .They are my father,my mother and of course me (I should be correct, but we more and more avoid using it in this case) I. Every member in my family works for his or her in We each have a trade, my father as a merchant seaman, my mother as a teacher, and I am an engineer. (tell it up front, then discuss it)

My father is a captain of seagoing merchant ship, and He has already been to many countries in all over the world. Once pirates striked attacked his ship and he got injured. My parents kept the truth from me because i would was about to take college entrance examination. He worked inside the within China after I graduated from the university.

My mother is a teacher, who has She taught Chinese in the senior middle school. Now she has retired. She spends her time to do doing what she likes.

I am an engineer; I got good grades in school but I spent lots of time to travelling when i was a student. Now i only want to stay at home after work, and occasionally Sometimes i go out with my friends.

I love my parents and they love me, too. They do not force me to do what i do not like. They behave exactly look like my friends. We can debate anything. I feel so lucky

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My family

I have a happy family.There are three people in my family- my father,my mother, and myself. Every member in my family works for his or her trade. My father is a captain of a sea-going merchant ship. He has seen many countries around the world. Once pirates attacked his ship and he was injured. My parents did not tell me immediately because I had to take college entrance examination. He worked inside the China after I graduated from my university. My mother was a teacher. She taught Chinese in the senior middlde school. Now she is retired. She spends her time doing what she likes. I am an engineer. I got good grades in school. I spent lots of time travelling when I was a student. Now I only want to stay at home after work. Sometimes I go out with my friends. I love my parents and they love me, too.They do not force me to do what I do not like to do. They are like my friends. We can discuss anything. I feel lucky...please point out the mistakes. Thank you!