Hi everyone, 

My name is Estella, I am from Shanghai, China, and I am 21 years old. I am now a college student, and I will be a sophomore next semester. My major is english,so i want any ways to improve english level,hope i can find some friends here,lol
I like watching movies a lot ,i am a big movie fan,and i like flying kites,riding bicycle,it is good for health,and i really enjoy it.

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