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Today after work I return home and went for a walk. Jīntiān xiàbān huíjiā wo qù sànbù. 今天 下班 回家 去 散步.

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Today after work I return home and went for a walk.

Jīntiān xiàbān huíjiā wo qù sànbù.
今天 下班 回家 去 散步.

今天下班回家后,我去散步了。

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Today after work I return home and went for a walk.

wo Jīntiān xiàbān huíjiā hou qù sànbù le.
我  今天     下班    回家   后   去  散步  了.

or:

Jīntiān xiàbān huíjiā hou wo qù sànbù le.

今天      下班    回家  后   我   去 散步 了.

Considering that you used past tense in your sentence, so i suggest that you should use 后 and 了 to express the same tense in Chinese sentense.  

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Today after work I return home and went for a walk.

Jīn tiān xià  bān huí jiā wo qù sàn bù.
今   天   下   班   回  家 我  去   散  步.

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