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I just came home from work... 1.15 am =( But I have a good news! Today we have got a Schengen visa. We are going to Italy in October. I really need a vacation. It will be great holiday in Rome with Roma =) Moreover, visa is valid for three month since middle of October, so we can go to somwhere in Europe on Christmas holiday. We think about Amsterdam or Paris... We had thought go to Asia (India, Thai or Sri Lanka) but I am not sure yet that it will happen. Will see =) Please, correct errors, I am afraid I screwed up with Past Perfect in penultimate sentence)))

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I just came home from work... 1.15 am =(

...but I have a good news! Today we have got a Schengen visa. We are going to Italy in October. I really need a vacation. It will be great holiday in Rome with Romans[?] =)
Moreover, the visa is valid for three months starting in the middle of October, so we can go to somewhere in Europe on Christmas holiday. We are thinking about Amsterdam or Paris... We had thought about going to Asia (India, Thai or Sri Lanka) but I am not sure yet that it will happen. We'll see =)

Please, correct errors, I am afraid I screwed up with Past Perfect in penultimate sentence)))

 

[Good work.  We usually just say 'go somewhere' rather than 'go to somewhere'.  If the place is named, then use 'to' - "We are going to Venice."]

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I just came home from work... 1.15 am =(

But I have a good news! Today we have got a Schengen visa. We are going to Italy in October. I really need a vacation. It will be great holiday in Rome with Roma Romans. =)
Moreover, the visa is valid for three months -- from the since middle of October, so we can go to somewhere in Europe over the on Christmas holiday. We are thinking think about Amsterdam or Paris... We had thought to go to Asia (India, Thailand or Sri Lanka), but I am not sure yet that it will happen. Will see =)

Please, correct errors, I am afraid I screwed up with Past Perfect in penultimate sentence)))

 

 

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