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tried to write a outline A man who is a bank clerk, his name is Andy. One day he was indicted for wife murder even though he didn’t kill his wife. But he was got a conviction and put in to the Shawshank prison. Andy is a taciturn person so he didn’t talk others. But a month passed when he came to this prison, he met a man who knows how to get things. His name is Red. Andy talked with him first time. Then he asked him that he can get rock hammer or not. It made to start the relations between Andy and Red. Few days later Red got a rock hummer and gave it to Andy. The environment of prison is terrible. But Andy never gives up having a hope. He tries to live everyday hardly. One day he decided to escape from this prison using a rock hammer which he got from Red. Will he success to escape from this prison or not?

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A man who is a bank clerk, his name is Andy. One day he was indicted accused for murdering his wife wife murder even though he didn’t kill his wife. But he was got a conviction and was put in to the Shawshank prison.
Andy is a taciturn quiet person so he didn’t talk others. But a month passed when he came to this prison, he met a man who knows how to get things. His name is Red. Andy talked with him for the first time. Then he asked him that he can hit get rock buttom or not. It made to start the The friendship between Andy and Red has been made.
Few days later Red got a rock hummer and gave it to Andy.
The environment of prison is terrible. But Andy never gives up on having a hope. He tries to live everyday hardly. One day he decided to escape from this prison using a rock hammer which he got from Red.
Will he success to escape from this prison or not?

 

A male bank clerk name Andy <--another way to say it.

Then he asked him that he can hit get rock button or not.<-I'm not sure but that is what I think you are trying to say.

 

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That is an excellent movie! Very well done.

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