My summer This summer was the best in my life. I had three hard exams, but I passed the exams on A. In July I was in the Bashkortostan Republic,which has beautiful nature. I was in Ufa and Beloreck.

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My summer This summer was the best in my life. I had three hard exams, but I passed the exams on A. In July I was in the Bashkortostan Republic,which has beautiful nature. I was in Ufa and Beloreck. Ufa is the capital of Bashkortostan. It's beautiful city. It has many beauteous places . I was falling in love Ufa and I am going to live in this city. I was travelling on Bashkortostan about 15 days. It was good days. After Bashkiria I was in Gay town. THis is my home town. It's in Orenburg are. In August 24 was baik-fest, where was SG band. It's rock band of Ekaterinburg.I was happy, because in Gay are rarely good music . Generally my summer was wonderful. And I hope that the next summer will be interesting too.

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My last summer

This summer was the best one in my life. I had three hard exams, but I passed all of them with As.
In July, I was in the Bashkortostan Republic, which is known for its natural beauty. I was in Ufa and Beloreck. Ufa is the capital of Bashkortostan. It's a beautiful city. It has many beauteous places. I fell in love with Ufa and I am going to live in this city. I was travelling in Bashkortostan for about 15 days. Those were good days.
After Bashkiria, I was in Gay town. This is my home town. It's in Orenburg area.
On August 24, it was baik-fest and the SG band was there. It's a rock band from Ekaterinburg. I was happy, because there is rarely good music in Gay.
All in all, my summer was wonderful. And I hope that the next summer will be interesting too.

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Хорошо ) but where is this town of Gay?

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