The almighty surrenders

In this text my goal is to describe a scene from a movie.
I choose to describe a scene from the movie “the almighty” with Jim Carrey. First, Bruce sees his wife praying to God and crying out. She prays and says that she is still loves Bruce but didn´t doesn't want to love him anymore, after all this that he did. She cries desperately, asking God to forget him and yells “ I don’t want to live anymore”. While he sees this scene, Bruce's heart sinks and He he (lower case h) realizes that he made his wife suffer a lot. He rushes to the street crying and yelling. It´s night and it´s raining and he doenst´realize that he is in the middle of a highway. In this moment Bruce made makes his first prayer. He talks to God saying that He (usually use upper case H when He refers to God) won and he doesn´t wants to be God anymore. He doesn´t wants to decide about his own life and prefers that God chooses for him. In this moment he opens his arms in a gesture of surrender. Suddenly a strong light covers the body of Bruce Bruce's body. He feels the presence of God and then opens a smile on your face begins to smile. The light becomes more intense… He thinks that it is God but is surprised by when a truck runs over him him over.
So Bruce is then wade wide awake and he thinks that he´s is the in heaven and has having a conversations with God about the meaning of prayers and about faith, but he isn´t instead of being dead, he's actually in a coma in a hospital. After this conversation, God gives him an opportunity to remake his life alongside his wife.

You did a very good job overall. Just a few little mistakes here and there, which I think you will get better at with more practice. This sentence was my favorite: "In this moment he opens his arms in a gesture of surrender." I can tell that you want to start using more expressive sentences, and your word choice is great in this regard. Keep it up!

By the way, I love this movie : )