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Today
Today was a good day because I woke up late and I watched TV. I went to the church in the morning and I behaved well. I ate rice and soup at the lunchtime and after that, I turned my computer on. I was using my computer while my brother was drawing something odd. I was about to ask him about the/his pic but I didn't do it because I could have messed up his concentration. I just waited for awhile and when I thought it was finished, I got up from the computer chair and walked up to him. It was a wonderful picture. Even though he didn't study anything about it, he was able to do it pretty well. "He painted a portrait of Cupid". He finished up happy and with a big smile. On the other hand (el uso de esta frase no funciona aqui), I was proud of him.
OK, after that happened and my brother headed outside. He was killing the time talking with his girlfriend. oooo but hold your horses mates: where were my parents? I realized that something important was happening on the street outside because my brother ran up to me at my side and loudly said to me: "Come on David, go outside, something is happening" I just replied to him: What now? What's happening bro? He didn't tell me anything, so I turned off my computer and did as he said.
When I went outside, I couldn't believe it: an old man was playing my guitar, and he was incredibly talented at it. I attempted to play like him but you know, I wasn't able to. I'm very happy because I listened to that man playing my guitar. He wrote down his own song, and "sang it for us"
I wanna say: él la canto para nosotros (he sang it for us!), How is that in english?.
No estoy segura porque tienes estas frases entre comillas pero las he corregido. Muy bien hecho David! Tu domingo me parece muy relajante y intereste. Sigue adelante con tu ingles... jaja y tambien con aprender tocar la guitarra ;) un abrazo desde california!
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