Hi everyone.. I have a story for you.. Please help me correct.. Thanks..

LAURA
Once upon a time there was a girl called Laura, who had been living to Bogotá for a long time, but now she was leaving. She didn't want to be there anymore.
The point is that she had a really old chair in her apartment, and she hated it. However, she did't have any money to buy another.
One day, she was walking around the city, and she saw so many people crowded together. What was happening? A contest.
She was very interested in that contest because the award was a really great couch, the best ever. So she asked for the rules.
The person who would be able to drink the biggest quantity of milk, would win the game. So she said: "I really want that couch. I'll do it".
So she dared to do it. When she started drinking , everything was going well. She was quickly going over the other people. When she ended, she realized that she had won. That was a great moment in her life, but...

When she stood up, something was wrong, she felt a terrible stomach ache, and she suddenly threw up in front of the crowd of people.

What an embarrasing moment. She couldn't help feeling she was the mos silliest person in the world.

At last, the embarrassing feeling was so much that she decided leave that place, becouse since that, everyone knew her as the gril who vomited for drinking a lot, but not beers, just milk...

[Good English.  I hope that isn't the end of the story.  It's rather depressing.]