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About me
FIRSTLY - about me.
I'm fond of books. I'm buddhist. I'm THE mother of a four-and-half-a-year-old boy. I need English for my work - in my town there are very few ENGLISH TEACHERS, and a huge NUMBER of PEOPLE who need to study it.. But PERSONALLY - it's a language of Bradbury, Carroll and Miln, and MANY other greats. So THEREFORE I need to know it AS WELL AS Russian OR even better.
I hope that helps! Happy studies. :)
About me
At first - about me.
I'm fond of books. I'm Buddhist. I'm a mother of a four-and-half-a-year-old boy. Of course I need English for my work - in my town there are very few teachers of English, and a huge amount of those who need to study it. But for me myself, [1] it's the language of Bradbury, Carroll, and Milne [2] and a lot of other greats. So, I need to know it like Russian, and even better. )
[1] Good variants: But as for me, it's... Or: But as for me, myself, it's ...
[2] I assume your reference is to A.A. Milne. If I'm incorrect, oops!
Your post in general sounds very natural, and very close to "native" in tone.
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