Nobody can control my time
My boss tried to despil my weekend for working overtime.I refused him.I knew that I probably will be fired.But I think doing a job is service to enjoy life.I have my own life choice.And do a job is just for a living.Definitely,do a job which I really enjoy is the lucky thing.Do what kind of job is one of many choices of my life.Nobody can control my time.Life is short,I will taste it slowly.
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Nobody can control my time
My boss tried to spoil my weekend by asking me to work overtime. I refused hit. I knew that I would probably be fired, But I think doing a job serves as a way to enjoy life. I have my own life choices, And I work just for a living. Definitely,doing a job, which I really enjoy, is the lucky thing. Doing that kind of job is one of many choices of my life. Nobody can control my time. Life is short, so I will taste it slowly.0
terrific
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Nobody can control my time
My boss tried to spoil my weekend by wanting me to workI hope you don't get fired, Charlene!
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Nobody can control my time
My boss tried to spoil my weekend by asking me to work overtime. I refusedThese are not all corrections, some are suggestions for what I think you really want to say. :)
I understood what you wanted by despoil, but the word isn't common. Spoil is fine. if you wanted something more dramatic, you could use hijack or plunder.
Please put a space after full stops. If the space isn't there, I don't see the punctuation properly.
Use would for possibility. Will is a fairly definite prediction.
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