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First kiss! The story tell about the feeling of the strange girl with the strange emotion that she experienced. Did you kiss anybody in the first time that you meet her? And how is your feeling? Will you remember that kiss or no soon you will forget it? And the how feeling of the girl with the kiss? Before talking the emotion of the girl in this story, I think I should introduce the characteristic of her and the situation in order to happen the kiss. The girl – who is not so beautiful, not so style, she is normal girl as the other girls. She is a romantic person who usually watches the Korean film and she always feels shy when she sees the kiss sentence. She is curious about how feeling of the kiss until she has an opportunity to kiss someone in real life. So, with the curiously, she ask the man who dated with her in the first time that “can she try to kiss him? She really want to know that the feeling of the kiss”. Of course, in that situation, is there any man disagree for she do that? Absolutely, no one, right? And the awkward kiss happened. Maybe, with the man who kisses the girl will not have so much feeling, but with the girl, that is a first kiss in her life, and that kiss will follow her in whole life. The kiss brings for her a lot of emotion of the pure love, of the first feeling of love.

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First kiss!

This story tells about the feelings of the strange girl with the strange emotions that she experienced. Did you kiss anybody in the first time that you meet her? And how was your feelings? Will you remember that kiss or will you soon you will forget it? And the how about the feelings of the girl with the kiss?

Before talking about the emotions of the girl in this story, I think I should introduce the her characteristics of her and the situation in order for the kiss to happen the kiss. The girl, who is not so beautiful, and not so stylish, she is as normal a girl as the other girls. She is a romantic person who usually watches the Korean films, and she always feels shy when she sees the kissing senquences. She is curious about how the feeling of the kiss until she has an opportunity to kiss someone in real life. So, with the curiousity, she asked the man who dated with her in the first time that, “Can she try to kiss him? She really wants to know what the feeling of the kiss”. Of course, in that situation, is there any man who disagrees with her doing that? Absolutely, no one, right? And the awkward kiss happened. Maybe, with the man who kisses the girl will not have so much feeling, but with the girl, that is a first kiss in of her life, and that kiss will follow her for her whole life. The kiss brings for her a lot of emotion of the pure love, of the first feeling of love.

 

[These edits are based on what I thought you were trying to say, so I could have misinterpreted what you were getting at]

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it was so interest for me, ya for the first time it is very emotion for both boy and girl.

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