The best things in Europe

Europe has attracted me since I was in primary school. My mother and I are big fans of travelling through Europe, especially western Europe. It was amazing to be surrounded by all those buildings, churches and monuments you used to see only [on the screen]*, now standing tall and upright.

The best ice cream
I love Swiss and Italian ice cream. They are not only varied and yummy, but [they] also have emotional appeal. Residents enjoy scenery while tasting ice cream. Sitting by the lake in Luzern and Foutana di Trevi in Rome are the best choices.

The best view
As for the views, the banks of the Seine are a romantic view for me. For centuries, this river has attracted the admiration of the world. The allure and charm of the Seine captivate all who visit there. [Beige]** buildings, porcelain bridges and blue sky would surround you and give you the best memoryies. 

The friendliest people

I have most friends Most of my friends are in Germany and Spain. I have been to I once stayed in Berlin for 2 weeks and travelled to other cities of in Germany many years ago. Scrupulous and friendly are the best words to describe Germany. Besides [Similarly]***, the Spanish really love to are really into smile at you despite the fact that you are a stranger. [Their smiles and kindness must make you have better mood.]**** 

To sum up, Europe is not only the birthplace of western culture, but also a stunning continent in the world.

Best wishes to Europe!

*Perhaps you mean "in pictures" or "on TV." "On the screen" is not technically wrong, but it seems like a rather awkward way of expressing something

**Did you mean "big" insead of "beige?"

***I'm trying to figure out your meaning here. "Besides" doesn't really work in this context. After looking at the dictionary definition I wonder if you may have meant "in addition" or "moreover" or "furthermore." As a native speaker I can't really explain it, but "Besides" just doesn't sound right in this context.

****This sentence implies that you don't know if their smiles give someone a better mood, but are concluding with your own opinion that they do because in your mind, it can't be any other way. This style doesn't really fit with the rest of your writing. You should be more definitive and say something like "Their smiles are enough to put you in a good mood" or something like that. 

Not bad at all! Most of your mistakes revolve around ommissions of small words such as articles and prepositions, idiomatic expressions, and general writing style. Keep practicing and you'll keep getting better!

The best things in Europe

Europe has attracted me since I was in primary school. My mother and I are big fans of travelling in Europe especially western Europe. It was amazing to be surrounded by those buildings, churches and monuments you used to see only on the screen, now standing tall and upright.

The best ice cream
I love Swiss and Italian ice cream. They are not only varied and yummy but also have emotional appeal. (really? you want to hug an ice-cream maybe 哈哈) Residents enjoy scenery while tasting ice cream. Sitting by the lake in Luzern and Foutana di Trevi in Rome are the best choices.

The best view
As for views, the banks of the Seine are the most romantic view for me. For centuries this river has attracted the admiration of the world. The allure and charm of the Seine captivate all who visit there. Beige buildings, porcelain bridges and blue sky would surround you and give you the best memory.

The friendliest people
I have most friends in Germany and Spain. I have been to Berlin for 2 weeks and travelled to other cities of Germany many years ago. (not so very many, I think!) Scrupulous and friendly are the best words to describe the German people I feel. Besides, As for the Spanish, they are really into smiling broadly despite the fact that you are a stranger. Their smile and kindness must make your mood have better mood.

To sum up, Europe is not only the birthplace of western culture, but also a stunning continent in the world.

Best wishes to Europe!

Lucky you, travelling and seeing and experiencing so much so soon!

The best things in Europe

Europe has attracted me since I was in primary school. My mother and I are big fan of travelling Europe - especially western Europe. It was amazing to be surrounded by those buildings, churches and monuments that you normally see only in movies and pictures now standing tall and upright.

The best ice cream:
I love Swiss and Italian ice cream. They are not only varied and yummy, but also have emotional appeal. Many residents enjoy scenery while tasting ice cream. Sitting by the lake in Luzern and Foutana di Trevi in Rome are the best choices.

The best view:
As for view, the banks of the Seine are romantic view for me. For centuries this river has attracted the admiration of the world. The allure and charm of the Seine captivate all who visit there. Beige buildings, porcelain bridges and blue sky surround you and offer you great memories.

The friendliest people:
Most/Many of my friends come from Germany and Spain. I have been to Berlin for 2 weeks and travelled to other cities of Germany many years ago. Scrupulous and friendly are the best words to describe Germans. The Spanish are really into smiling, despite the fact that you are a stranger/foreigner. Their smiles and kindness make it difficult to be in a bad mood.

To sum it up, Europe is not only the birthplace of western culture, but also a stunning world continent.

Best wishes to Europe!

I think that your English is phenomenal! I saw you already received one correction, but wanted to show alternative ways of saying things. Keep up the great work!