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Sorry, Ayad, but there are some mistakes in your translation too:)
Apple Sheng, I rewrote parts of your notebook entry, but didn't change the colour. Just compare it to your version. I apologize for not making it clearer. Great job, by the way.
About me !!!
In China, we actually start learning English in primary school. Now I am in high school, so I have been learning English for ten years. As my English improved, I found English very interesting and gradually fell in love with it. I am going to be a translator when I grow up and I hope to work in an English-speaking country, because I really, really like English. Also I think I can get good grades in English on the college entrance examination. So I want make friends who can speak English. If you want to study Chinese, I am willing to teach you. Thanks!!
About me !!!
Actually,in China ,we start learn English in start from primary school. Now, I am in a high school student,so ,I have been learning English for ten years.As my English have improved.I find English very interesting and I gradually fell in love with English. So I am going to be a translator when I grow up .And I hope I could my work can in an English speaking country.because I really really like English.Also, I think I can get good grades in English in the college entrance examination, I can get good grades in English. So I want to make friends who can speak English.If you want to study Chinese .I am willing to teach you .Thanks!!
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