Repair my house
After heavy rain, my little house leaks, about one week ago. This morning, Had carried grit, cement, bricks and asbestos tiles, my grandpa, my grandma, my mom and I started to work. First of all, paving tiles. In case of crashed by northwest wind, we put some bricks on the tiles. Secondly, mixing up grid, cement and water. They should be added in proportion, otherwise, it will be unsubstantial. Thirdly, pouring cement. We put some papers on the brick, and poured cement on the papers to avoid crack. After hard working, we finished it. All of us were very tired, but looking at our new house, we were very happy.
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Repairing My House
After heavy rain my little house leaks, About one week ago after heavy rain,my little house started leaking. This morning, Had carried grit, cement, bricks and asbestos tiles, my grandpa, grandma grandparents,mom and I me started to work. First of all, paving tiles. In case of crashed by northwest wind<--(What do you mean?), we put some bricks on the tiles. Secondly we mixed up grid, cement and water. They should be added in proportion, otherwise it will be unsubstantial. Thirdly,we poured the cement. We put some papers on the brick and poured cement on the papers to avoid cracking. After our hard working, we finished it. All of us were very tired, but after looking at our new house, we were very happy.
Mostly I rearranged words so they would make more sense. I wasn't sure what you meant in this area so I didn't change it. Did you mean "In case the house was crashed by the northwest wind" ?
You did very well overall,and I'm glad to know your house was rebuilt!
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