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Iont speek english very well and i'm scared it's full of mistakes.Can somebody correct me? this is a reply message to a guy: Hey, That message was very cute/nice from you . I'm very said about I've to go home already. I hope I'm going to see you before leaving, if not bye.I'll miss everyone. I hope I can coming back in 1-2 years again. Take care.Krissy

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I don't speak English very well and I'm scared it's full of mistakes.Can somebody correct me?

This is a reply message in reply to a guy:

Hey, that message was very cute/nice from you. I'm very said about that I've to go home already. I hope I'm going to see you before leaving. If not, bye.I'll miss everyone. I hope I can comeing back in 1-2 years again. Take care.Krissy.


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this is a reply message to a guy

This is a message in reply to a guy

This is a reply to a guy

 

I'm very said about I've to go home already.

I'm very sad that I've to go home already.

I'm very sad about having to go home already.

I prefer splitting "I've" to "I have" to emphasis "have".


I hope I can coming back in 1-2 years again.

I hope I can come back in 1-2 years again.

I hope I'll be coming back in 1-2 years again.

Maybe you wanted to put "again" after "back" (although you don't need it). Your sentence seems like you come back every 1-2 years.

 

if not bye

This is very short, lacking emotion. You could just say "goodbye" to make it warmer.

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I don't speek English very well and I'm scared it's full of mistakes. Can somebody correct me?

This is a reply message to a guy:

Hey, That message was very cute/nice That was a very nice message from you. [Note: I don't think "cute" is the word you want here. You wouldn't say that to a guy unless you were flirting with him, and even if you were, I'm not sure it really fits the context.] I'm very said about I've that I have to go home already. I hope I'm going to see you before leaving. If not, goodbye. ["bye" is probably too informal in this context.] I'll miss everyone. I hope I can coming come back again in 1-2 years again. Take care. Krissy

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I dont speak english very well and i'm scared it's full of mistakes. Can somebody correct me?

this is a reply message to a guy:

Hey, That Your message was very cute/nice from you . I'm very sad about that I have to go home already. I hope I'm going to see you before leaving, if not bye. I'll miss everyone. I hope I can come back again in 1-2 years again. Take care. Krissy

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i don't * sorry:)

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