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The new nightmare..
Today I feel quite restless, because I did not sleep well last night ( or you can say " I have not slept well SINCE last night ", but you can't use present perfect ( have + verb) if you specify a certain time ) ... I went to sleep rather late (because I had a very nice conversation with my American friend), but that wasn't something unusual to me..
For all the day I'd been suffering with lack of oxygen, so probably that became the reason for my bad dreams...I felt asleep in a trice, but then I was awakened by a nightmare...instant nightmare! I say it, because if i see dreams they're nightmares moreover than often (i guess you want to say " they are more likely to be nightmares") ...and they are usually just the same..but this new one scared me indeed!
I woke up in at four in the morning and was trying to get calm for a while, but anywаy I felt disturbed and couldn't sleep soundly...
So I had got up before my alarm clock started to ring, and felt a bit uneasy =(
Ой это наверно ужасно было... надеюсь с тобой больше такого не бывает =)
The new nightmare..
Today I feel quite restless, because I have did not sleep well last night... I went to sleep rather late because I had a very nice conversation with my American friend, but that wasn't something unusual to me.. isn't anything unusual for me.
For all the day The whole day, I'd been suffering with from a lack of oxygen, so, probably that became was the reason for my bad dreams...I felt fell asleep in a trice quickly, but then I was awakened by a nightmare...instant nightmare! I say it this (In English we don't need a comma before "because" like in Russian) because if I see dreams I think you mean "If I remember my dreams" or "When I have dreams" Видеть сон = to dream they're nightmares moreover than often more often than not...and they are usually just the same..but this new one scared me indeed!
I woke up in at four in the morning and was trying to get calm for a while, but anywаy I felt disturbed and couldn't sleep soundly...
So I had got up before my alarm clock started to go off, and felt a bit uneasy =(
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The new nightmare..
Today I feel quite restless, because I have did not sleep well last night... I went to sleep rather late (because I had a very nice conversation with my American friend =D), but that wasn't something unusual to for me..
For all the the entire/the whole day I'd been suffering with from lack of oxygen, so probably that became the that was probably the reason for my bad dreams...I fell asleep in a trice quickly (Этот слово почти никогда не используется), but then I was awakened by a nightmare...instant nightmare! I say it, because if i see dreams they're nightmares moreover than often (Я думаю, здесь ты хотела сказать "more often than not")...and they are usually just the same..but this new one scared me indeed!
I woke up in at four in the morning and was trying to get calm calm down for a while, but anywаy (Этот слово не имеет значения здесь- Возможно сказать "despite that" но даже это действительно не нужно.) I felt disturbed and couldn't sleep soundly...
So I had got up before my alarm clock started to ring, and felt a bit uneasy =(
Бедная Лена! Надеюсь, что все у тебя хорошо... Там нет ничего, чтобы бояться- я тебя охраняю! ;)
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