My Happy Day In Happy Valley!

Today is a very cool day, and I spent my whole day with my familly in Happy valley in Shanghai.
First I played rode the Mega Drop ,which excited me very much! When it went up, I felt the wind and the cool air . But it fell suddenly, fast as the wind, I even forgot to scream!
Then i played rode  the rollercoaster, and it took us a lot of time to wait, but worth waiting. I am a brave girl so i chose the frist row but the boy next to me felt pity because he did not want to sit in the frist first row, the reason why he sat beside me was that there was no other seat, so he was very nerious and kept telling me that he was afraid he was afraid he was afraid. lol During the playing time we both sreamed! The feeling was so amazing！ I bet this is the best rollercoaster i have ever ridden!
We played a lot of entertainments from morning to evening, and we got tired. There was a show in the evening and we watched it and enjoyed it, it was a pretty visual feast.And there was a program, where a beatiful bus carried a band and they played the instruments , letting people sing. My cousion and me I took part in it and we sang <love story>.I was a bit shy but singing really made me happy .I love it!
This is my happy day in happy valley!!!

Just some quick corrections.  I did not make further corrections.

Is this amusement park in Hangzhou?