Ethan Lawrence's notebook entry: Oct 29, 2010
Hello my friends ... today I start my journal again as I begin to move to San Francisco for my Architectural Studies School.
I begin to journal and use something of personal in quotation. Remember, I am only beginning student in Chinese. So tell me what you like better in expressed in Chinese sentence.
First one:
我從我的生活經驗中學習到
如果這是你在世界上的最後一天，就好好享受今天的生活吧
讓他是幸福甜蜜的
Second One:
我從我的人生經歷中學習到
如果這是你在世界上的最後一天，就好好享受今天的生活吧
創造自己渴望的未來
Which statement do you like better?
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Corrections · 3
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Hello, Ethan, long time no talk......keeping busy, both of us, pursuing our dreams......
I happened to come across your entry today, please allow me to do a little(maybe a lot :) ) correction to your writing. Cheers!
我从我的人生经历中学习到，
尽情享受今天的生活吧，
就如同这是你在世界上的最后一天；
请不要放弃追逐你渴望的未来，
哪怕这真的是你的最后一天。
尽情 means 'to one's heart's content',
就如同 means 'just as if',
and the last two sentences means 'don't give up pursuing the future you dream of please, even if it was your last day.'
I happened to come across your entry today, please allow me to do a little(maybe a lot :) ) correction to your writing. Cheers!
我从我的人生经历中学习到，
尽情享受今天的生活吧，
就如同这是你在世界上的最后一天；
请不要放弃追逐你渴望的未来，
哪怕这真的是你的最后一天。
尽情 means 'to one's heart's content',
就如同 means 'just as if',
and the last two sentences means 'don't give up pursuing the future you dream of please, even if it was your last day.'
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the first.if it's the last day,how can you creat the futures you want?so the second is wrong
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我觉得第一种比较好。第二种的第三句话跟前面两句没有关系。都是最后一天了，如何去创造未来呢？
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