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painting today ,because there are many pen so don't take and i will put them in my hair.the result when i finished painting,i didn't find my pen .Five minutes later Found it on top in my hair , thinking at this moment , What do I do something stupid, god ⊙▽⊙
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I was painting today, and because there are were many pens so don't take and I will put them in my hair. The result was that when I finished painting I couldn't find my pen. Five minutes later I found it on the top of my head in my hair. I was thinking at that moment, "Why did I do something so stupid? God!" ⊙▽⊙
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I was painting today.because there were many pens I didn't know where to put them so I put one in my hair. When I finished painting I couldn't find one of my pens! Five minutes later I found it in my hair. Thinking about it, why do I do such things (我为你把这段文章全纠正。你写的很好,但学外语的时候最好用简单的词语\句话。不要 translate word for word. Example. "The result when I finished painting." 就是"结果。。。的意思。this is not as common in English as in Chinese. Hope this helps.
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