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My new computer My dear anut bought me a new Thinkpad last week.I feel very happy,it helps my work a lot.But I have to say it is a little difficult for me to use the Windows 8,it almost took me two days to learn how to use it,maybe because I am not the guy who loves gadgets.Well,in nowadays,I think I have to learn something more about these electronic products.

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My new computer

My dear aunt bought me a new Thinkpad last week.

I feel very happy,it helps my work a lot.

But I have to say it is a little difficult for me to use the Windows 8,it almost took me two days to learn how to use it,maybe because I am not the person who loves gadgets.

--Guy refers to a male gender or a fellow being. 

--Hence is not really suitable to call yourself one. >_<

--Or you may write as: 

--I do not love gadgets that much.

--Trivia: a person who loves technology is called: technophile 

 

Well,in nowadays,I think I have to learn something more about these electronic products (14 words).

--Or you may say: Now I have to keep abreast of these electronic products (10 words).

--Keeping brief would help people understand you faster :)

--Abreast: to keep up to date. Is there a Mandarin equivalent to it?

 

--JK

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