Last night

Last night was crazy... I went to bed and have had a short sleep. Why was it short? Because my dad yelled: ''Raph has just died!'' Everybody got up at once moment. Raph was our close friend and he wasn't an old man. He just was very ill, and none knew, how to treat this illness. All the doctors could only say: ''I'm sorry''. So, all I want to say: ''He was a very kind and clever human, and we'll always remember and love him.'' Everyone has lost people close to them people and maybe more than one. I wish hope you NEVER lose close people and friends!
Thanks for your attention.

Last night

Last night was crazy... I went to bed and have had a short sleep. Why is was it short? Because my dad yelled: ''Raph has just died!'' Everybody got up at in a moment. Raph was our close friend and he wasn't an old man. He was just very ill, and no one knew how to treat this illness. All the doctors only said: ''I'm sorry''. So, all I want to say is: ''He was a very kind and clever human, and we'll always remember and love him.'' Everyone has lost close people and maybe not once. I wish you NEVER lose close people and friends!
Thanks for your attention.

I went to bed and had a short sleep. --> A more natural way of saying this could be: "I went to bed but didn't sleep much."

Everybody got up at in a moment. --> "Everybody got up immediately."

I'm sorry for your loss.

Last night

Last night was crazy... I went to bed and have a short sleep. Why is was it short? Because my dad yelled: ''Raph has just died!'' Everybody got up at a moment. Raph was our close friend and he wasn't old man. He was just was very ill, and none no one knew how to treat this illness. All doctors only said: ''I'm sorry''.So, all I want to say: ''He was a very great king and clever human, and we'll   were always his familly members  children orand we loved him.'' Everyone has lost close people and maybe  not one. I wish you never lose close people and friends!
Thanks for your attention.