My unlucky day

Ok,today I must say something about what happened in touday's morning.

OK. Today I want to say something about what happened this morning.

用must也可以，但我个人觉得want to更自然。我们一般不说today's morning，而说this morning。顺便说一下，昨天早上是yesterday morning，而不是yesterday's morning。

when I wake up this morning, as usual,I checked my massage,

When I woke up, I checked my messages as usual.

首先，英文里，每个句子只能有一个核心思想。独立的思想应该分成独立的句子，并不能像中文那样用逗号把很多句子串起来。

其次，叙述过去的事情要用过去时态，所以要写woke up，而不写wake up。

最后，massage是按摩的意思。

the first thing I got to know was that I broke up!

The first thing I got to know was that I broke up!

可以

Ok, my boyfriend dumped me.

可以

I have no idea.

什么意思？I have no idea why?我不知道为什么？

It seems like that yesterday everything was fine,

It seems like yesterday everything was fine.

It seems like后面不要加that。然后这要做独立的句子。

we chatted and laughed online(cause we are far away ).

We chatted and laughed online (because we are far apart).

又是一个独立的句子。far away不合适，因为要写从什么地方离得远。如果想说你们俩之间的距离远，那么就要写far apart。

Now I think if I should do something to chage it.

Now I'm wondering whether I should do something about it.

不太清楚你原来想表达什么意思，不知道我修改的对不对。

But after thought it twice, I found maybe we don't suit each other.

But after I thought about it again, I realised that maybe we don't suit each other.

这里要写think about。

So I just want him to find his truly love.

So I just want him to find his true love.

truely是副词，但在这里，love是名词，所以应该用形容词，即true。

my unlucky day

Ok,today I must say something about what happened in touday's morning. when I wake up this morning, as usual,I checked my massage,the first thing I got to know discovered was that I broke up! Ok, my boyfriend dumped me. I have no idea. It seems like that yesterday everything was fine,we chatted and laughed online(cause we are far away ). Now I think if I should do something to change it. But after thought it twice, I found maybe we don't suit each other. So I just want him to find his truely love.