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Journey to Cambodia We (I and my husband) have been to Cambodia 3 times. But every next time we open this country with new and new sides. This summer we have visited very interesting town Kep. Kep is famous by the tastiest crabs, peper and salt plantations and also by caves. We started our trip by visiting salt plantation. It is big field near the ocean. Our driver said, that there wasn't season for salt growing, because of rin season. Salt can grow just when it's very dry weather. But we could see store of salt in special hangar and special equipment to get some salt from soil. We took some salt with us, it's very tasty. After that we moved to caves. There are mountains with big holes inside, but it wasn't so interesting for me. I have seen more impressive caves in Montenegro and the Tien Shan mountains. Then we have reach the top of mountain, where was a beautiful pagoda with amazing sights around it.We entered inside, nobody was there, and we could pray in the deep silence. When we finished, we went to the paper plantation. There we met very nice lady - owner of that plantation, she had excellent english and explanes us all about how to grow and make tasty paper. I was suprised listened that red, white and black paper grow on one tree. They just differ by time of gather. Whet paper is young, it's green, after that it becomes red. You can get white paper, if you take red paper from tree, peel it and then boil about 1 week, after that you should dry it. And you have white paper. Black paper is green paper from tree boiled 2 weeks and dried after that. Red paper is just dried paper from tree. We have bought some red, white and black paper from this lady. They have very different smels! After that we was tired a little and very hungry, so we went to the crab market to eat these famous blue crabs. I ordered crabs with vegetables, and my husband ordered crabs with green paper. It was very tasty! We have been sitting on the morring line, water from the sea put to us time to time, and it was sunset, very romantic dinner. After dinner we lied to hamacks and dreamed. It was awesome trip!

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Journey to Cambodia

My husband and I have been to Cambodia three times. (For anything under 10, always spell out the number.) But every next time, we always discover new things.
This summer we have visited a very interesting town called Kep. Kep is famous for the tastiest crabs in the region, salt and pepper plantations, and also for its caves.
We started our trip by visiting a salt plantation. It is a big field near the ocean. Our driver said (no comma) that it wasn't the season for salt growing, because it was the rainy season. Salt can only grow when the weather is very dry. But we did get to see a store of salt in a special hangar, and special equipment used to get some salt from the soil. We took some salt with us, and it's very tasty.
After that we went to the caves. There are mountains with big holes inside, but it wasn't so interesting for me. I have seen more impressive caves in Montenegro and the Tien Shan mountains.
When we reached the top of the mountain, there was a beautiful pagoda with an amazing view all around it. We went inside and nobody was there, so we could pray in the deep silence.
When we finished, we went to the pepper plantation. There we met a very nice lady who was the owner of that plantation. She spoke excellent English and explained to us all about how to grow and make tasty pepper. I was suprised to learn that red, white, and black pepper grow on one tree. They just differ by time of harvest. When pepper is young, it's green, and becomes red as it matures. You can get white pepper (no comma) if you take red paper from the tree, peel it, and then boil it for about 1 week. After that, you should dry it and you have white pepper. Black pepper is green pepper from the tree that is boiled for two weeks and then dried. Red pepper is just dried pepper straight from the tree.
We have bought some red, white, and black pepper from the plantation owner. They have very different smells!
After that we were a little tired and very hungry, so we went to the crab market to eat the famous blue crabs. I ordered crabs with vegetables, and my husband ordered crabs with green peppers. It was very tasty! While the sun was setting, we had a very romantic dinner as we saton the mooring line, with water from the sea coming up to us from time to time.
After dinner we lied in hammocks and dreamed.
It was an awesome trip!

This is a really great story!  And you did very well writing it.  Just remember that pepper is very different from paper :)

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Journey to Cambodia

We (I and my husband and I) have been to Cambodia 3 times already, but every next each time we open visit this country we leave with new sights and sensations and new sides.
This summer we have visited a very interesting town Kep, . Kep is famous by for the tastiest crabs, pepper and salt plantations, (needs a comma because of 'pepper and salt' - but 'salt' doesn't have plantations!)  and also by for its caves.
We started our trip by visiting the salt flats plantation. It is , a big field near the sea ocean. Our driver said that there then wasn't the season for salt growing, because of the rainy season. Salt can grow only be harvested just when it's very dry weather. But we could see the store of salt in a special hangar and special equipment to get some salt from the soil. We took some salt with us, it's very tasty.
After that we moved on to the caves. There are We saw mountains with big holes inside, but it wasn't so interesting for me. I have seen more impressive caves in Montenegro and the Tian Shan mountains.
Then we have reached the top of the mountain, where was a beautiful pagoda with amazing sights around it. We entered went inside, nobody was there, and we could pray in the deep silence.
When we had finished, we went on to the pepper (pepper or paper? haha) plantation. There we met a very nice lady - the owner of that plantation. She had excellent English and explained to us all about how to grow and make tasty pepper. I was suprised listened that red, white and black paper grow on one tree. They just differ by time of gather. Whet paper is young, it's green, after that it becomes red. You can get white pepper, if you take red pepper from the tree, peel it and then boil it for about one  week, after that you should dry it, and then you have white pepper. Black papper is comes from green peppercorns from the tree boiled for two weeks and dried after that. Red pepper is just dried pepper straight from the tree.
We have bought some red, white and black pepper from this lady. They have very different smells!
After that we were tired a little tired and very hungry, so we went to the crab market to eat these famous blue crabs. I ordered crabs with vegetables, and my husband ordered crabs with green pepper. It was very tasty! We have been sitting on the wharf/jetty mooring line, water from the sea put splashing to us from time to time, and it was sunset, a very romantic dinner.
After dinner we lied lay in to hummocks and dreamed.
It was an awesome trip!

 

Articles (a/an/the) are a big bugbear, particularly for Russian speakers!.

Pepper - paper sound a little similar pepper has the 'e' sound as in 'get', paper has the 'a'/'ai' sound as in 'wait'

'sea' is usually an area of ocean partially/completely enclosed by land.

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"I" and "me" always come last, and they are not interchangeable. For example, you can say "my husband and I went somewhere," but never "my husband and me went somewhere." If you're ever confused, take the other person out of the sentence and see if it makes sense (I went somewhere / me went somewhere). It jumps out at you right away when you do that.
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I don't have time to correct this a the moment, but it is always, "such and such person and I'. Never the reverse. If it is reverse, I believe it must be "me and such and such person." It is an established grammatical rule that relates to cases, inasmuch as English has them.

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