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if my life can restart,i would like do ... i am 23 years old,but i till a sophomore,i am older than my classmates.i want to be at my other classmates age like as it is usual,but life can't restart.i did many wrong things at past,but i didn't regret.I know life is full with right and fault,when i look back,those things is not as much important as it is before. but here i just suppose my life can restart if my life can restart,i would like to join up after high graduation,not working in the society. if my life................,i might choose another high school,because the school i went to was not good,and students were unfriendly,and the teachers were not responsible,i 'd like to be diligent in high school. if my life can..........,i would like to cherish my love in high school,i wouldn't choose to give up easily. if ..........................,i would like to be diligent in my first semester of my university's life. at last,i don't regret what i did in pass,i know that what i do now and what i did in the pass will play a important role in my bright future.

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If my life could restart, I would like to do ...

I am 23 years old but still a sophomore, therefore I am older than my classmates. I want to be at my other classmates age like usual but life can't restart. I have done many wrong things in the past, but i don't regret anything. I know life is full with right and fault,when i look back,those things is not as much important as it is before.
but here i just suppose my life can restart
If my life could restart, I would join up after highschool graduation and not work.
If my life................, I would choose another high school, because the school i went to was not good. The students were unfriendly and the teachers were not responsible. I'd like to be diligent in high school.
If my life could.........., I would like to cherish my love in high school, I wouldn't choose to give up easily.
If .........................., I would like to be diligent in my first semester of university life.
Finally, I don't regret what i did in the past, I know that what I do now and what I did in the past will play a important role in my bright future.


Good vocabularly and fairly good use of past tense! Here are a gfew pointers:
- Remember to put spaces after full stops/ periods (.) and commas (,)
- Capitalise I's 
- Watch out with using the present tense when talking about the past ie. is - are 
 
I would like to cherish my love in high school - Love of? 

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