Beginning of Autumn

This summer is so hot in Hunan,Sichuan and other province,Shenzhen is okay.But i feel well in this Summer,I like every seasons.They have different views and feel.Spring is so nice,peaceful and colorful;Summer is ethusiasm and bright;Autumn hm..is happy ,mature and move....Regarding Winter hehe wow just thinking it i can feel its wonderful.The world is too beautiful..enjoy it

Hello, Dream. I enjoyed reading your article, which was well written. I agree the seasons all bring their own special qualities and feelings. I have just suggested a few amendments to make the essay read a little better. 

Beginning of Autumn

This Summer is so hot in Hunan,Sichuan and other provinces (province),although Shenzhen is bearable (okay).But I (i) am feeling (feel) well (in) this Summer. (,) Infact, I like every season(s), as each brings differing (.They have different) views and feelings (feel).Spring is so nice,peaceful and colourful (colorful);Summer is enthusiastic (ethusiasm) and bright;Autumn hm..is happy ,mature and more (move)....Regarding Winter,  hehe wow just thinking about it, I (i) can feel its wonderful.The world is too beautiful..enjoy it !

Beginning of Autumn

This summer is so hot in Hunan, Sichuan and some other provinces, but Shenzhen is okay. Yet i feel well/good in this Summer, I really like every seasons. They have different views sights and sensations feel. Spring is so nice, peaceful and colorful; Summer is enthusiastic(?) and bright; Autumn hm... is happy, mature and moving/stirring(?). Regarding Winter hehe - wow just thinking about it i can feel it is so wonderful. The world is too beautiful... enjoy it!

Some of the seasonal adjectives are not natural or appropriate - what were the Chinese words you were trying to express?