Search from various English teachers...
China flagShine0126
shine's notebook entry: Oct 28, 2010 hello!I'm glad to meet everybody here.now please allow me to introduce myself to you my name is Shine,I'm 22years old,and I was born in the year of rabbit.I'm a lively girl with self-confidence.and I like to surf the Internet,listen to music and read books.my friends often said that I'm a kind girl.haha,maybe I have alrdady worked four years,and I think I'm a qualified ofice clerk.at last,I think I will make friends with everybody!

Corrections · 8

0

shine's notebook entry: Oct 28, 2010

hello!I'm glad to meet everybody here.now please allow me to introduce myself to you
my name is Shine,I'm 22 years old,and I was born in the year of rabbit.I'm a lively girl with self-confidence.and I like to surf the Internet,listen to music and read books.my friends often said that I'm a kind girl.haha,maybe
I have alrdady worked four years,and I think I'm a qualified ofice clerk.at last,I think I will make friends with everybody! 

note! your error with color pink pink
 
hello! I'm glad to meet everybody here .please allow me to introduce myself to you ,my name is Shine, I have 22 years old , I was born in the year of rabbit .I'm a lively girl with self-confidence and I like to surf the Internet,listen to music and read books , my friends often said that I'm a kind girl. haha,maybe  I have already worked four years,and I think I'm a qualified office clerk. at last,I think I will make friends with everybody!

for true! my dear friend , I study english,I am student in the school of tourism in mexico ,I just comply seven months of study  but..I not speak much ,I not know much english , I have knowledge of english, the basic of english. I for example 20% english I know..

 

 

0
yep, must be 24 in 2011.
0

shine's notebook entry: Oct 28, 2010

hello!I'm glad to meet everybody here.now please allow me to introduce myself to you
my name is Shine,I'm 22years old,and I was born in the year of rabbit.I'm a lively girl with self-confidence.and I like to surf the Internet,listen to music and read books.my friends often said that I'm a kind girl.haha,maybe
I have alrdady worked four years,and I think I'm a qualified ofice clerk.at last,I think I will make friends with everybody!

hello, I am glad to meet everybody here.  Please allow me to introduce myself to you.  My name is Shine, I am 22years old and I was born in the year of rabbit. I am a lively girl with self-confidence.  I like to surf the Internet, listen to music,  and read books.  My friends often say that I'm a kind girl, haha, maybe.
I have alrdady worked four years and I think I am a qualified ofice clerk. I hope to make friends with everybody!


 

0
how can you be year of the Rabbit... If you are 22 years old... you cannot be Rabbit.. this year is Rabbit.... 2011, minus 24 = 1987...were you born then? bye bye
0

hi ,i have to admit , the notebook which i wrote here was downloaded from internet.

 

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today