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The summer festival!
Today, I went to the a summer festival. and the festival is It's the biggest one [or: the biggest festival] in my city.
I saw various kinds of floats (? is that correct in English? [yes, it is!]) called "Sansha" and "Dashi", and those which are all both big. A lot of men, women and kids were taking part in it the festival, pulling a ropes connected with to the Dashi, speaking loud in a kind of local language (different from not just a dialect), and giving us a happy time making everyone very happy. [or: entertaining everyone.] :D
You'll could see many boothes on the street, and I got some grilled pork on a skewer and "niku-man" ( how what do you call it?) that is made from flour dough, and filled with cooked ground pork (from according to wikipedia, haha).
Oh, it's not easy to explain cultural stuff. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say.
If "sansha" and "dashi" are two different kinds of floats, you should use "and". But, if they're two words with the same meaning, you can use "or".
"Speaking loud" is okay, but you could also use "shouting" or "chanting".
I think you could say "nikuman" in English. Or, the closest English word is probably "pork bun".
The festival sounds fun! In two weeks, my city will have an ethnic festival with foods and entertainment from many countries. I'm looking forward to it!
The summer festival!
Today, I went to (a)the summer festival. and (This)the festival is the biggest one in my city.
I saw various kinds of floats (Floats is correct, don't worry!) called "Sansha or Dashi", and (they)those are all big. (A)a lot of men, women and kids were taking part in it, (they were) pulling a rope connected with Dashi, (and) speaking loud in a kind of local language (which is different from a dialect), and giving us a happy time (Just a bit of a strange sentence, try: "Their performance made us very happy!"):D
(If you go to the festival, ) (y)You'll see many booth(es) on the street , and I got some grilled pork on a skewer and (a)"niku-man" ( how do you call it? I call it niku-man, but I lived in Japan :) ) (Niku-mans are) that is made from flour dough, and filled with cooked ground pork (from wikipedia, haha).
Oh, it's not easy to explain cultual stuff. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say.
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この話題はすごくむずかしいです。でも、すごかった!がんばってください!
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