IELTS writing task
the task 1
You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
Dear Mr Ben
Hi, this is Sena who is taking an evening class. But unfortunately, I think I am not going to take part in the course because I have found that I am too busy to continue the course right now. There are few reasons why I am so busy at the moment. First of all, I have to take care of my mother because of her illness. Second of all, I have to take care of my younger brother who is 8 years old while my mother is in the hospital. So i would love to take it from next term instead.
I would like to study about business because my dream is to become the owner who can have an own company. So that is why I wanna study business. Besides, I will be able to see what's happening in the world by learning business.
I have so much potential about studying but now the situation I am in is so bad and I don't know what I should do right now. That would be helpful if you could give me some advice for my studying while I am not in the course this term. Yours faithfully.
From Sena
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Corrections · 7
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Yes I have! s9e9na add me plz
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I can teach you english do you have Skype
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Attend *^
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Since you're taking IELTS, (a british system) do not use (I wanna study) instead use (I would like to study) or (I want to study) . And when starting a formal letter , u dont just start with Hi since thats when talking to a frend (informal) . Last part is that (I am not in the course) is wrong .. it should be (I am unable to attrnd the course) . Sorry if im correcting to much . Just trying to help out :)
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oh sorry abt tht but i even dont know why u cant send me a message. well if u wanna talk to me plz add me "s9e9na" on skype? i guess i need to sort the problem out asap~~
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