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Going abroad
In today's English course, which I've just finished, I discussed the topic of "going abroad" with my English teacher.
I've never been in a foreign country for a long period of time, except for short term sightseeing and business trips. The first country I visited was Japan around 10 years before. Our general manager arranged for us to live in a suburban region, which would take us 1 hour from hotel to the office. The purpose that my boss explained was to let us to experience the life of a normal citizen in Tokyo. It's quite a good idea, I thought. The subway was a necessary transport for us to be taken everyday. Honestly, I really admired the good social order of local people, which made the public environment quite efficient.
Now, it becomes my habit. If I stay in a foreign country, I will try to eat in a local restaurant, take the public transportation, and talk with residents. It'll let me understand more about this country.
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Going abroad
In today's English course which I've just finished, I discussed the topic about "going abroad" with my English teacher.
I've never been spent a long time in a foreign country for a long period of time, I've only had except the short term sightseeings and business trips. The first country I visited was Japan, around 10 years ago before. Our general manager arranged for us to live in a suburban area region, which that would take us 1 hour travel from hotel to the office. The purpose, that as my boss explained, was to let us to experience the life of a normal citizen in Tokyo. It's quite a good idea, I thought. We had to travel by The subway was a must transport for us to be token every day. Honestly, I really admired the good social order of local people, which made the public environment quite efficient.
Now, it has becomes my habit. If I stayed in a foreign country, I would always try to eat in a local restaurant, take the public transportation, talk with residents. It'll lets me understand more about each the country.
<Please help me to revise it, thanks a lot>
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