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My aspirations I'm Paula A. Flórez, I study modern languages in the University of Caldas- Colombia , that's one of my occupations and one of the most important things in my life. My other passion is to sing. Since last year I sing in a choir. My family at first didn't agree of that, because they assure I must focus on my carreer. Nevertheless, I have discovered that these two occupations match so good each other. I have improved so much in both because of it. To have many occupations is not a wrong decision, It complements your ideas and creativity, You become open-minded and you solve better your problems and doubts. Quand je finisse mes études je voudrais commencer mon parcours professionelle comme chanteuse à l'Université de Caldas et melanger mes deux aspirations. Ainsi, je voyajerai par tout dans le monde en exerçant comme professeure et chanteuse. Je souhaiterai me spécialiser comme professeure de l'espagnol dans un pays étrangère, par example en Canada ou à l'Alemagne. Par rapport à chanter, j'aimerai chanter à Paris et à l'Italie.

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My aspirations

I'm Paula A. Flórez, I study modern languages in the University of Caldas- Colombia , that's one of my occupations passions and one of the most important things in my life.(An occupation is a job in which one earns a salary while a passion is an object of a very strong desire)  My other passion is to sing. Since last year I sing have sung in a choir. (o se puede decir "I have sung in a choir since last year")
My family at first didn't agree of with that   my decision to focus on two things at once (here I changed the word "that" for this phrase because I didn't believe that the reader would easily understand what "that"referred to based on the limited context), because they assure thought that I must should focus solely on my carreer. Nevertheless, I have discovered that these two occupations interests match so good well with each other. I have improved so much in both because of it.
To have many occupations passions is not a wrong decision, It can complement your ideas and creativity.  You become open-minded and you are able to solve better solve your problems and clarify your doubts.
Quand je finisse mes études je voudrais commencer mon parcours professionelle comme chanteuse à l'Université de Caldas et melanger mes deux aspirations. Ainsi, je voyajerai par tout dans le monde en exerçant comme professeure et chanteuse.
Je souhaiterai me spécialiser comme professeure de l'espagnol dans un pays étrangère, par example en Canada ou à l'Alemagne.
Par rapport à chanter, j'aimerai chanter à Paris et à l'Italie.

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