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my wish I have many hopes.I want my parents in good health.I wish i can happy everyday.I wish we can together forever with my lover.I want my job is funny and i like it .In weekend,i can go shopping with my friend,or go to somewhere we like and where we want go. But,the live is hard,many hopes can't come ture.There are no friends here.I don't like my job.I hate one who i live with. So,i should make some change,right?

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my wish

I have many hopes.

I want my parents to be in good health.

I wish I could be happy everyday.

I wish I could be together with my lover forever/

I want my job to be fun and I hope that I like it.

On weekends, I'd like to go shopping with my friends, or go somewhere we like and somewhere we want to go.
But, life is hard, and many dreams can't come ture.

I have no friends here.

I don't like my job.

I hate who I live with.
So, I should make some changes, right?

 

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I loved this entry! Very nice! But there is one problem, only one grammar concern. In English when you want to say "I hope..." "I wish..." "It would be nice if..." You are speaking in the subjunctive mood.

 

So you wrote:

I wish I can happy everyday. What you should say is "I wish I could be happy," or "I wish that I could be happy." 

 

"I wish" is in the indicative, and "could" is the conditional form of to be able to (the can verb).

 

I hope I helped! Fighting! 

 

 

 

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