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Why I couldnt have a good sleep? Today I was so lazy.I woke up at 1 pm in this afternoon,since I went to bed at 3 am last night. Usually when I go to a pub or club,after that I can't have a good rest. I guess because of my brain still can't stop working and it stays still being a bit excited. anyway I wanted to go out since the weather was not really bad.however I felt like to do nothing so just stayed home. So lazy Sunday~.But in the other hand,being lazy is not that bad

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This is really good, Ayu. Just a few suggestions:

 

Why I couldnt have a good sleep? (This is actually a statement, not a question ? -- you could ask "Why couldn't I have a good sleep?" or "Why I couldn't have a good sleep." Flipping the "why" will change question to statement in this case)

Today I was so lazy. (don't forget spaces after periods and commas . , ) I woke up at 1 pm in this afternoon since I went to bed at 3 am last night.
Usually when I go to a pub or club after that I can't have get a good rest that night.
I guess it's because of my brain still can't stop working and it stays still being a bit excited (this is just about right, but it's not quite accurate in this context. it would be better to say): continues to be active.
Anyway I wanted to go out since the weather was not really bad (simply saying "nice" instead of "not really bad" also works), however I felt like to do doing nothing so I just stayed home.
So it's a lazy Sunday for me~. But on the other hand, being lazy is not that bad

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Thank you very much for correcting,Brian! Why I couldn't have a good sleep. Today I was so lazy. I woke up at 1pm this afternoon since I went to bed 3am last night. Usually when I go to a pub or club,I can't get a good rest that night. I guess it's because my brain can't stop working and continues to be active. Anyway I wanted to go out since the weather was nice,however I felt like doing nothing so I just stayed home. It's a lazy Sunday for me.But on the other hand,being lazy is not that bad.
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It happened almost the same to me... I went out on friday although I knew I had to do stuff from college.. the point is that I didn't do anything becouse I woke up so late.. and I sleept all the day... And then.. Regretting.. :S

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