The weather is so cold
In China , the winter is coming. It was especially cold , especially in the morning and evening
Today I add several clothes, afraid of the cold . Some boys don′t afraid cold,bu I don′t like cold weather.
My friend say " You have to exercise your body is weak .Don't like a man" HAHA!O(∩_∩)O~. I think i well exercise for my health . So now I am planing to go to ,if every day to do some exercise.
Come on , I can do it Ithink. ↖(^ω^)↗
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The weather is so cold
In China , the winter is coming. It is especially cold , especially in the morning and eveningToday I am wearing several clothes, afraid of the cold . Some boys are not afraid of the cold, But I don′t like cold weather.
My friend said " You have to exercise your body is weak. You are not a man" HAHA!O(∩_∩)O~. I think i will exercise for my health . So now I am planing to go to every day and do some exercise.
Come on , I can do it think. ↖(^ω^)↗
(Good work!)
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Good work! But you should pay attention to the interpunction and the capital letters and small letters.:D
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