a first Diary in English 7/29/2013

The weather is great today.
In the morning,I received a strange message from a net friend.He said,could you borrow two hundred for me ? I was so strange . For a minter (<- What does this mean? "minute?") I reply no. Then,he was angry an said why do not you believe me ? I had no language . I think that big woods that birds have. (<- What does this mean?) I had not reason to believe him that he is a good man .we know only two weeks..I was so depressed.
Although I met the strange thing,I was still happy. Because today is sunday . I do not work and I watch TV all morning.It is too relaxed for me.


My first diary entry in English: 7/29/2013

The weather is great today. In the morning, I received a strange message from an internet friend. He asked if he could borrow two hundred yuan. I was bewildered. Even though I had no reason not to trust him, I had only known him two weeks, so I said no. He was angry and said "why do you not believe me?" I had no idea what to say! It made me feel depressed. But in a way I was still happy because today is Sunday, I don't have any work to do, and I get to watch TV all morning. I'm too relaxed to feel depressed!

Take more time to get your whitespace and punctuation correct (I know it's a big difference from Chinese). It makes your writing look much more professional and intelligent. AlsoitisquitehardtoreadthisDon'tyouthink :P