Travel in Beijing

This summer ,my classmate and I go went to the Beijing for jobs.But I was so tied when I arrived in beijing.People It is so crowded with people that I lost all my enthusiasm.I just stayed in beijing for about a week.During this week, I understood that personal ability is very very important.Now the most important thing for me is learning.My major is International Economy And Trade.This subject requires high English proficiency level, so I hope I can make friends to teach me English.I am outgoing and I like travel.Everyone who wants to study chinese can contract me~~~haha

Well done! As a tip, avoid repeating locations unless they change or you wish to emphasize on them (but dont worry about that for the moment).  Languages and Cities names always take a capital :) letter in English.

Good luck!