I'm stuck!!

Hi....

I think I'm stuck on a level in both languages I'm learning! I was about to add one other language, Esperanto, to my language learning process, but I've lost all my reputation [? motivation?] suddenly. I think I'm stuck in the same level in both English and Korean. My English is not that bad, but my Korean is in a big trouble! While I'm building up sentences for myself, I do it perfectly right, but when it comes to building up an essay, the whole thing goes out of my mind and I make childish mistakes which make even me laugh! It also causes embarrassment for me, too! I'm stuck! Learning lots of vocabulary does not help me in this level! I don't know what to do! I know the only thing that can help me is to write and write and write, but the problems is that I can't find a good topic to write about, something simple and interesting! I'm really tired of repeating the same structures and sentences, even same topics again and again!

Oh... I feel like I'm just wasting my time! But deep inside I adore both English and Korean and I want to become fluent in both, with all my heart! I can't find anyone who is interested in chatting with me in Korean to help me improve it! Everybody wants Skype and... I don't use it! :| Why it's so hard?! :|

Thanks for reading and revising! :)

-Use 'also' or 'too', but not both in one sentence.

-Remember the comma at the end of a clause.

-Some of your longer sentences would be better divided into two shorter sentences.

I'm stuck!!

Hi,

I think I'm stuck at the same level in both languages I'm learning! I was about to add one other language, Esperanto, to my language learning process but I've suddenly lost all my motivation. I think I'm stuck at the same level in both English and Korean. My English is not that bad but my Korean is in a big trouble! While I'm building up constructing sentences for myself, I do it perfectly right, but when it comes to building up an essay, the whole technique goes out of my mind the window and I make childish writing mistakes which after writing makes even myself laugh! It also causes embarrassment for me, too! I'm stuck! Learning lots of vocabulary does not help me at this level! I don't know what to do! I know the only thing that can help me is to write and write and write, but the problems is that I can't find a good topic that is simple and interesting to write about! I'm really tired of repeating the same structures and sentences even the same topics again and again!

Oh... I feel like I'm just wasting my time! But deep inside I adore both English and Korean and I want to become fluent in both, with all my heart! I can't find anyone who is interested in chatting with me in Korean to help me improve it! Everybody wants to go on Skype, but I don't use it! :| Why is it so hard?! :|

Thanks for reading and revising! :)

A couple of tips:

- As you go to advanced levels, you'll depend more on context for your meaning instead of the meanings of single words. Of course you'll learn more words, but also focus on longer structures and phrasings.

- No-one's asking for an epic story here. :) Just something that's short and only a couple of paragraphs will be more than enough.  Just tell us a funny observation, your opinion or even tell us a joke. For example, one of my past texts was about how someone had posted a recipe for ice on a cookery website.