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Love is
"Love is" is a song of backstreet boys‘ that i used to love.
in my dream there was a boy love me so much and also be my soulmate.We talked about literature, music, movies, news stories, even politics.We cooked together,raised a child,traveled around the world.We spent whole life togheter no matter rich or poor.We faced every setback and our hands are still together tightly.
But as time goes by,i don't believe it ,even when i have my boyfriend.
there's so much things to destory love.i saw my girlfriend fall in love and they broke up just because the boy went to another rich girl . i saw my aunt got a divorce just because she was no longer a beautiful young girl.Eminem sings 'so after a year and 6 months,it's no longer me that you want'. love is an impulse,at the moment the girl is miss right ,her smile is the spring sunshine. but as time goes by ,she will be a simple girl that never interesting or lovely . i don't want to destroy the felling so i always like a boy deep in my heart never go up.
But my sister is brave. when she fell in love with a german singer,she began studying german . 'Every time I feel difficult to remember German words,i just say to myself 'come on girl ,he is nearer''she said. during these years ,the love is still strong. when i said that get close to a singer is dangerous and harmful for they always too romantic to live,she just said ' it's alright only because i love him' .
in my mind ,love is a relationship between two people that never abandon each other. i have no idea about my sister .
today ,i saw the news about marriage. the man got married at 48 years old when the woman is 82 years old. now they are married for 29 years. she is not rich or beautiful .she believes she "would be dead" if she hadn’t got herself a 67-year-old toyboy.
i can't understand.
"it's simple, if you have been lonely, suddenly someone come in to your life ,close to your soul, you will care about nothing' said my friend .
suddenly ,A drop of tear falling down my face.
ps:This composition is almost my diary, I wrote these words hardly. But my grammar and vocabulary are poor, if you can help me polish or correct , I would be very grateful
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