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After looking at my earlier response I noticed a few mistakes I made
Which species of animal do you think might disappear in the next fifty years?
That was a topic in my last English class.
My answer to the question was giant pandas.
They give birth to only one baby at a time, and to survive, (comma) they have to eat so many bamboos that they might not be availble in their surrounding areas.
Also, polar bears could be endangered due to the man's excessive hunting and the polar icecaps melting. ("and the melting of the polar icecaps" makes a little more sense.)
I saw several pictures on the Internet news this morning of a mother bear and two baby bears who were looking for food and wandering icecaps. (these two sentences flow better combined)
It made me feel warm and a little bit sad somehow.
I really want them to be safe and have good lives.
Which species of animal do you think might disappear in the next fifty years?
That was a topic in my last English class.
My answer to the question was giant pandas.
They give birth to only one baby at a time, and to survive they have to eat so many much bamboos that they might not be able to get find in their surrounding habitat areas.
Also, polar bears could be endangered due to the man's excessive hunting and the melting of the polar icecaps melting.
I saw several pictures on the Internet news this morning.
A mother bear and two baby bears were looking hunting for food, wandering among the icecaps.
It made me feel warm but also and a little bit sad somehow.
I really want them to be safe and have good lives.
Which species of animal do you think might disappear in the next fifty years?
That was a topic in my last English class.
My answer to the question was giant pandas.
They give birth to only one baby at a time, and to survive they have to eat so many bamboos that they might not be availble in their surrounding areas.
Also, polar bears could be endangered due to the man's excessive hunting and the polar icecaps melting. ("and the melting of the polar icecaps" makes a little more sense.)
I saw several pictures on the Internet news this morning of a mother bear and two baby bears were looking for food and wandering icecaps. (these two sentences flow better combined)
It made me feel warm and a little bit sad somehow.
I really want them to be safe and have good lives.
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